Fear.

Fear.

A Poem by Chrys

Spare me
Nightmare me
You'd dare be,
Sincerely
When air leaves
So unfairly?
Brand me, declare me
I've never been care free
The curse clutches squarely,
These words my despair plea.

© 2014 Chrys


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Love your rhyme scheme and your use of syllables in each line...I, myself tend to be a bit OCD about that in my writing. The depth and impact of your words reach inside and pull out the darkest emotions and throw it in the reader's face. Great piece!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece appears like a 'mantra' to keep one from fear.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay i absolutely love your writing, it has so much meaning

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is interesting and mesmerizing piece, simply beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chrys
Chrys

St. Cloud, MN



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I am a realist through & through. Life is not fair & I embrace that fact. I can't stand when people thank "God" for their good fortune. I love music and take every opportunity to have it on. I a.. more..

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