THE MUSIC

song i wrote check it out enjoy it hate it doesnt really matter to me :) just review it. Also you kinda have to imagine a beat to it.

Pushing me to the dancefloor the beat it screamin my name. telling me to move dont ne stiff just drift. It moves inside of me spinning out of countrol.

Its the music Pullin me in. Its the music Pounding the ground. Music it plays through the crowd. It flows through the sky, and the music never stops.

Radiates through my body. It moves me back and forth. Never stops makes me pop. I wanna dance to it forever. Slowly drags me in till i cant fight its growing force.

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When the lights go down, and the sound goes low. I know that its time to go. but the music still plays in my head still while I'm in my bed. I dream about it's embracing sound before you know its waking me up.

Chorus 1X

Getting louder each time: Its the Music, Its the music Its the music!!

Whisper: Its pulls you in.

Reviews

[Haifa]

I like your words about music, it is nice. Plus, I agree so much with what Coyote Poetry said. Nice, well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Music is a big part of a life. I like the movement and description in the poem. The words flow like music and I like the upbeat feel in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote