My Life

A short poem that tells how i feel about my life and what goes on

MY Life

My Life is full of crazy people with crazy lives.

It has insane things that never seem to go away.

My life is sad at times but happy also.

People and events make me want to cry, but i always love to smile.

I really don't have the time to cry either.

My life is filled with hiding my true feelings as best i can.

I bottle them all up until i cant take it anymore and explode.

I dont let anyone see though because im supposed to look strong.

My life couldn't get better or worse.

It is overflowing with love and caring, but there

is somber, hurt, annoyingness too.

My life I guess it could get worse, id rather it stay at this level really.

There is a balance between things both good and bad.

My life... It's what i live everyday. I try to be me about it,

but sometimes i wish it was different, WHen i look back on what has happened

through my 14 years, and see what has happened to others.. I know I've come to appreciate what i have.

Author's Note

ignore speliing and grammer and punctuation please!

Reviews

[Haifa]

It is very great, beautiful and powerful poem, I really found it like that. When you wrote a poem about your life, that means you are brave to write of it. From you poem, I can see that you always try to hide your feelings but that is not a good thing.. try to share your feelings with someone close you trust or understanding you. Also, you always want to be happy I wish you be always happy forever but it is ok to cry a little.. when someone cry doesnt mean you are weak even the stronger person would cry. But I hope you will cry happy tears from laughing or something like that :)
Well done

[Aldora Sparrow]

Very insightful. I'm surprised that you are only 14. This poem opens a much wiser part of you.
Poem-wise, the line breaks break off at weird places and you need to capitalize. I think this might work better as a story.
Otherwise, nice work

[SamBug]

This was very wise and beautiful

[Coyote Poetry]

You are very wise. for your age. Even when we are old we need to be thankful for a beautiful day and the possibility of something good to happen. Life isn't easy but the lucky people don't allow the small things to slow them down. A excellent poem.
Coyote