meeting

the sky was a water crystal
upon roaring shores,
I thought I could
die in the iridescence.
but you wanted to
talk about spending more
time with me
and how much
you're thinking of me.
I am everything you like
you say. if my body were
a map of stars, you'd have
stumbled across
the wormhole of
reciprocity.

Reviews

[Neville]

This is another incredibly beautiful poetical work and one I would have been very proud of had I written it myself.....A true delight to read & read again.......N

[Relic]

Wow, I pretty much get this. I like the clever connotation going on here, you're very good.

[MadalaJose]

that's an interesting piece. I like it