smiling beings

i blew
bubbles
underwater
on your white
rolling
belly





rained
a million
starry mad
kisses all
over your
eyebrows,
ears,
nose,
ribs,
legs,
and wriggly
toes







your giggles
are my every
breath



and we slept
with me holding
your hand



undisturbed

afternoon
bliss

Reviews

[caesarkreshen]

You are in the running for most girlish.

[Neville]

This really is a delight, you have made an old bloke smile and chuckle his way through a cold, wet and grey English Thursday in March, what more could I ask? Cheers, N

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for this smile----i can hear him giggling all the way on this side of the world.

[Gaia Octavia]

This made me think of my son ☺ I especially enjoyed the imagary of bubbles on a "white rolling belly." At the same moment, it brings to mind the image of blowing "raspberries" on a tiny tummy as well as the image of bubbles created by white rolling waves of the ocean. Truly love this!

[Pansy]

This is so wonderful! It's very cheerful and made me smile.