QuickSand

I'm falling for her quickly, at this speed I know I'll drown....

 She’s addictive like a drug.

I fear overdose.

But why is that so ? I ask my self each day - why her.

 why her ? I feel like I can’t breath if I don’t hear her voice , but why ? 

I know its too late.

    I know I'm already standing

 knee deep

     In this quicksand 

That will drag me down 

     Drowning me

 In this inevitable end

Reviews

[Illumina]

I can relate to this on a personal level. A beautifully sad poem. It's amazing.

[Damien Ridge]

Very relatable. I feel I've been in quick sand before, falling for a girl/woman so fast I'm losing my footing... Good portrayal of falling fast! Thanks for sharing.