Shadows

A vampire life

Shadows

The moon is dancing in the darkness

The world has gone to sleep

The time for us is now

the night has spread her wings

The owls are hunting

flowers closed their leaves

but our life is just unreal

we are the shadows of the past

which repeats itself in enternity

Author's Note

please help me with the grammar problems

Reviews

[Woody]

beautiful write. tiny correction, perhaps. "which" and "repeats" :)
nice poem, pen on.

[Xx_Mizfit_xX]

beautiful right! fantastic imagery!

[Sami Khalil]

"the night has spread her wings




The owls are hunting

flowers closed their leaves"

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful write...Pen on...:).........................