God's Shore

Wrote this at work :), I was in the spirit and felt free <3

Daydreaming of dancing in the sand 

Swirling with my arms extended

Feeling the sun's rays hand to hand

There alone I feel protected

Glancing into the beaming sun

The breeze and I are suddenly connected

I know his work is not yet done

Only his presence gives me clarity

Stars are now appearing one by one

Even the luminous moon shines prosperity

God's Love will always be infinite

The crashing waves gives me sincerity...

Reviews

[duck]

I saw the sign like you lizzy. loved how you turned the things around you to turn into a message from the big man. the breeze and connecting was art as god creates these as well. saying only he gives you clarity is your faith in full power and lots of readers will take strength from this poem. protection was also a great inclusion as lots will get comfort from this. keep writing.

[Abhishek Izy]

Sweet and subtle write, almost edging on sounding religious, but the emotional elements makes it more of a personal piece. Nice work.