Addicted

Addicted

A Poem by Cold_Soul88

                                 I'm craving for a certain woman. 
                                 All because of her love.      
                                 She's unlike any other drug.
                                 I begin to feel under the influence.
                                 Just off her kisses and hugs.
                                 It's a unbelieve high I'm so in love.
                                 Or maybe it's lust.
                                 All I know is she a must.
                                 My family and friends says she not to be trust.
                                 How can I leave her alone?
                                 When she the one I want.
                                 Been around her make me feel so free.
                                 But then again is she the one I need?
                                 She always tell me.
                                "Don't nothing else matter like you and me."
                                 I can't believe her love and words.
                                 Got me mentally weak.
                                 I'm confuse off emotion.
                                 I guess it's love potion.
                                 Cause she rubbing off on me as if she lotion.
                                 We have so many moments.
                                 Like watching the sun set over the ocean.
                                 I have finally came to my final decision.
                                 I can't let go of this woman for its clear to see.
                                 That loving her have became habit for me.


 

© 2011 Cold_Soul88


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"All I know is she a must" is, like, the hottest line ever. I have to try and work that into a sentence one of these days. :) This is nice, great sexy feeling, very languid in language and tone. Something to read into someone's ear, quietly. Very nice indeed! Thank you for sharing it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Like the 'rap' flow, some super lines in there, very readable.
*bird*

Posted 12 Years Ago


"All I know is she a must" is, like, the hottest line ever. I have to try and work that into a sentence one of these days. :) This is nice, great sexy feeling, very languid in language and tone. Something to read into someone's ear, quietly. Very nice indeed! Thank you for sharing it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Cold_Soul88
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A Poem by Cold_Soul88