Covered in Scabs Again

Covered in Scabs Again

A Poem by Commanda Panda

When you loved me I was fine

But happy endings never last

You left me for a d****e

Now I’m living in the past

I’m emotionally crippled

Like a person in a cast

My sanity is fleeting

I’m declining very fast

My thoughts always come to murder

I never thought I’d hurt her

But I never thought the girl

Would end up a deserter

I was dark to begin with

But the gloom is spreading further

The voices in my head resume with

The whispers and the murmurs

© 2013 Commanda Panda


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Well, Mr. Panda. I think all the reviews below me speak for themselves on this one:P

Baby Ricochet: LMAO HAHA Rebound p***y. But I agree with Panda that Android P***y would be the preferred choice because then you do not have the emotional connections.

ANNOYING RIA FUN FACT

https://www.realdoll.com/

Panda, this is my gift to you :P

Burning Red Stapler: Touche.

Serenus Raymone: I like your observations by looking at the poem like a piece of Art, and then ending it with humor :)

RIA BENTHIL'S SENTIMENT

1. Wonderful piece of truth.
2. Wonderful Pandaness.
3. Wonderful poetry!

Happy writing to you!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vria P Crow

10 Years Ago

haha If you click on that link, you will hit me! :P
Four syllables bro. Rebound p***y. It's always worked for me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

10 Years Ago

Four syllables, bro. Android P***y.
It's a f*****g cliche but ALL is fair in love and war and sex and masturbation and porn and piety. It's a thin gray line we have to walk. Like a tightwire strung across a shark tank and the only way we'll give the observers their money's worth is if we walk it naked. With a chair. Made of pine.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

10 Years Ago

I see somebody has been taking their medication rectally. HUG!!!
ríða andlit

10 Years Ago

No, handsome, orally.
nice flow, quick dispersed thoughts...and shows ur a lil cray cray...but thats ok lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

10 Years Ago

Fireflies make me all hot and bothered. No pun intended.
Vria P Crow

10 Years Ago

Hmmm...Me too. :)
Vria P Crow

10 Years Ago

;)
this is a scary poem in more ways then one. i encourage you to talk with someone you trust to help you. maybe a teacher or other adult. We all have loved and lost. It does feel terrible, like the end of the world, but it is not. There will be others, better for you. try to let this go.

Posted 10 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Commanda Panda

10 Years Ago

Take your time. Panda will be here to embrace you with his madness.
oh my

10 Years Ago

i will get back to you, now is not the time
Vria P Crow

10 Years Ago

haha :) Is all I need to say.
food for thought here

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily B

10 Years Ago

yes, sewing my fingers to the bone
Commanda Panda

10 Years Ago

What color is the thread?
Emily B

10 Years Ago

black, always black

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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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