Junkie's Fix

Junkie's Fix

A Poem by Commanda Panda

This is no needle, but I have an injection.

You’re in my arms and there is no protection.

If you leave you will go with a craving

For all the joy that this dealer is saving.

I swear to God you will ache ‘til the next time.

You’ll come to me and beg for the mainline.

And who am I to deny you a trip?

Spread yourself like you’re parting lips.

In this deal we’ll both benefit.

Take a hold and tighten your grip.

© 2011 Commanda Panda


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This has good flow and it's funny. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Commanda Panda

10 Years Ago

Thanks for stoppin by.
thirty nine people came and read the words and all were too bashful to say a word, that is a shame

I've noticed that there are new rules regarding maturity content, you might want to look at that so your words don't get deleted

you've got style, i do believe you're going to shake the place up a little

Posted 10 Years Ago


Emily B

10 Years Ago

balance in all things
Commanda Panda

10 Years Ago

That balance doesn't neccessarily have to come from one person.
Emily B

10 Years Ago

can't argue that

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Added on November 11, 2011
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Commanda Panda
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Commanda Panda is a screenwriter and owner of indie film company Commanda Panda Productions. At one time he was more of a poet and lyric writer, but now he only writes poems and lyrics from time to ti.. more..

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