Heartbreak

She came to me. Dressed in black. A messenger of pain and betrayal. My heartbeat rapid and lost. The pain i will feel, finally pushes me over the edge. Slowly she comes to me. A fallen angel same as me. She has changed. The one i loved is gone.

" I dont love you anymore" She whispers in my ear. Her breath on my skin. I just stare out into nothing, Watching as my world begins to break down into nothing.

" Where are you" I whisper , my words begining to studder and fail on me.

" My , my dont you see? "

Author's Note

I'll finish the rest later..i kinda dont feel like writing anymore

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. this sounds interesting.. you feel that someone doesn't love you anymore cause they've changed.. people do change.. love is eternal.. many different levels that doesn't truly ever completely go away.. it may be stored in memories .. and kept through friendship forever... sure hope you finish this.. your writing shows you have intensity from others I've read.. I think you have alot to say that others can relate to.. keep it up!