A lovers pain

Ha this is kinda random , I sctually wrote this bc i remembered what ruth was telling me about tourting or something.

I was her prisioner. Her tourtured angel.I dreamed to fly but when i did she tore my wings and droped me down to hell. So now here i am , Cuffed and tied to the wall . Watching at my very soul goes away. Shh. Here she comes down the steps. My body beings to tremble and i here her comming closer. My eyes never leaving the floor, the bare cold wooden floor, I feel fingers on my face and down my chest. A heavy sigh comes from her mouth. I never dare look up into her eyes, and she beings to trace old scars she made. Down my arms, across my face, chest, X on my stomach. I wanna scream but i cant. I wont. My body almost bare. Strips of clothing cover from my hips to thighs. Aches and pains. I havent ate in three days, or what i think is to be days. Have drunk in long. God i cant even tell time anymore.  She turns to her table. Oh no not that table. So many knives and tools. All of this , Its inhumane. She picks up something i cant tell what it is. I hear the ping of metal against metal. She turns to face me and i see whats in her hand. A carving knife. Sharpened to the point. My eyes grow wide as she begins to walk towards me. " No" I cry " Please God no!!, please let me go!! what did i do? what did i do to deserve all of this?"  She smiles

" You dared to dream" She replies, her voice sounding so cold with no emotion " You dared to dream and leave me behind." lIfting the blade she presses it against my skin and begins to peel away. I scream. The pain the agony! I close my eyes in terror, all i hear is the sound of riping flesh and her laughing. Laughing as she rights her actions. All is black

Author's Note

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Reviews

[ruth]

very good....scary..but i wouldnt torture you like that... i laughed throughout the story(do you really think i would do that?)
overall very well writen with some mechanical errors
-ruth