The fool

The fool

He lost control

When it all went down the hole

He grasped on hope

But it was a wreck

They gave him something

He just couldnt bet

The fool

He should have game up

When time was right

But he kept on living

That fight

But in the end

He fell

And is lost in my hell

So say goodbye

Hes gone for a long time

Now im in control

Oh boy are things gonna roll!

Reviews

[Angel's Kiss]

seems like ur ready to start a new life and let ur old self in the past.
nice poem
*Angel's Kiss*

[..R.I.P..]

This is really interesting. I liked it. You have talent.

Thanks for sharing.

[ruth]

i miss your stories...