Epic Fail

I havent heard from you

In over 3 months

What went wrong?

Even after i called you

Screamed you name

You promised you will always be there

I was down to the point of suicide

You should have been there by my side

As i pressed the gun to my lips

And pop!

There i go into bliss

Bye Bye

Oh

How i saw you in my eyes

Reviews

[..R.I.P..]

This is sad.......it makes me remember things I've tried to forget....
Very good.....

[Boris Jonathan Novak]

Very painful work with so much passion of the human heart. It's really crazy how powerful emotions can be, and the depth of feelings we can go through. It's always good to share our thoughts and what we've felt... because, they're always others out there who can relate to those thoughts in writing.
Beautiful work. Thanks for sharing your pain. Many of us do know it all too well.

[ruth]

this is sad, and makes me wonder if you still have that idea of commiting suiside. and even if people promise they will always be by your side, that might be kind of impossible at some points. One must open up and see that the other person has other priorities, and your one of them, but seems kind of selfish that your character acted without thinking.
-ruth

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. this is intense.. someone really hurt you.. such powerfully sad emotion flowing through this one.. whoever hurt you that bad to feel that.. they aren't worth it.. take it from me! Love your honesty .. great way to get those feelings out.. keep it up! =)