Temporary Release

A poem about the potential cost of temporary solutions

Moving through the day
Everything moves with you,
Your thoughts and problems

There isn't time to forget.

Gripped by your vices,
Granted a temporary release

At the cost of what?
Your sanity?
Your happiness?

A temporary release

Sleep has arrived
And when you woke up

There's that brief moment,
When you forget

Pick yourself up and face it all again

Make your problems temporary
A temporary release may leave a permanent mark.

Reviews

[WritersRankings]

This has really clever wording, I appreciate that.

[ConfuzzledKidd]

Thank you!

[Saddam]

Make your problems temporary
A temporary release may leave a permanent mark.

Great poetry with message. Best write dear.