Orange Juice

Orange Juice

A Poem by ConfuzzledKidd
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A poem about an apology

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He put his orange juice on my desk
As he sat down with a smile,
I'd never seen him so vulnerable
So afraid.

It was the apology I needed
But not the one I was expecting,
This hadn't happened before
He couldn't look in my direction.

A stare I have been so accustomed to
Was gone

He left in a hurry,
I think I heard a sob
I called after him
Then I noticed
His orange juice was still on my desk.

© 2014 ConfuzzledKidd


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Great poem. ive only joined here today to get feedback to help me come a better writer.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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ConfuzzledKidd

9 Years Ago

Thanks you!

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