Fire to Ashes

is about lighting up a love that will soon ash.

You light me up inside,

To then throw some dirt on me,

Your passion is the flames to my heart.

But also my poisoned apple deceased I am,

For I now know what we become.

From fire to ashes,

And ashes to fire,

Don't know how to end this eternal flame.

                                             Help this orange, red, and blue turn off my sight please in till the end.

Author's Note

After so many years I know I am sorry for not been here for so long. I just hope you like my new pieces and writing and thank you.

Reviews

[Kari Rakitan]

This poem is so full of emotions. I've gone through a lot of pain over relationships, but I feel like turning it off would be an insult to the ones I still love, the ones who will remain in my heart forever.

[Pink Pastel]

Very true and I feel Like I lost some of that. And thank you.

[John the Baptist]

Relationships are lessons more than anything else. When we learn to love ourselves better, our relationships will follow in kind.

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you so much for your wisdom I appreciate it.

[Joshua Espinosa]

Toxic relationships. That is one hellhole that can reduce you to ashes. The flames of passion can blaze too fervently, burning yourself in the process. Thank you for sharing, Pink Pastel.

[Pink Pastel]

Your welcome and thank you so much.

[Anushka joshi]

This was little bit confusing first but next time I read , it I found it to be interesting .
💚💚

[Pink Pastel]

Oh will thank you I know the poem is a bit random.

[Anushka joshi]

Yeah , take is at a positive one and if get some time please go and have a look on my poems and let me know there about my mistakes .
thanks

[Pink Pastel]

Sure have a great day.