Of Losing

Expressions lost
heart tormented
ripped to very shreds

Lungs drowned
in acrid air
hatred turned inward

Always in the wrong
just a silly girl
knowing nothing about people

Emotional scars
prove a great weakness
such a weak b***h

Have no say
always wrong
never ever right

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

wow...the sense of defeat is strong.....try not to depend so much on an outside source for affirmation.....this may be the trick......you have captured the imagery of defeat....

[Gionelly Kiss]

Ok...try to avoid cuss words: they weaken your words and the effect.

[Tate Morgan]

We always are harder critics of ourselves than of anyone else Let the pain go and hounds of hell will leave your side and life will sweetly bless the love you do abide

[Dave]

Te amo mi amor. Lo siento por la forma en que han actuado