Senses

Emotional yet sensual

Undress my thoughts with your knowledge
Let our minds exchange taciturn wisdom through our eyes
I feel your kiss of thoughts romancing my brain
Probing poetic photographs reflecting in my eyes

Yeah it's our world now
You got my mind screaming in a low falsetto
Pause, pulse
I hear you playing that flute to my body's tempo

Your words are so enticing
How could they not send shivers down my spine
But no, we can't cross that blurred line
Caress my skin with the melody coming from your mouth

I know you taste the thirst in my breath
I'm dying to hear more of your creative thoughts
So I can exhale sensational senses in your ear

Quench my thirst with your versatile verses
That bless my soul
Even though my thoughts are in disarray
A whirlwind
You seem to be my calm

An anchor between reality and dreams
Undress my thoughts

Reviews

[ANTO]

I loved the eloquent allusions and sensuality in this. Very well done!

I didnt like the 'drop' of style in the second stanza with the use of 'yeah' and the words that followed but it came back in the third, for me.

I don't think it requires the Mature banner by the way.

[Cosmic_Elecktra]

Thank you. I'll make improvements in my other writings and ensure that the style is consistent throughout the poem and the word choice is proper