Continental

Continental

A Poem by Melliflower

© 2015 Melliflower


Author's Note

Melliflower
Five minute play around. x

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Nyu
Simple, beautiful work of feeling and imagery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment xx
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Sam
Remarkably similar to another poem you wrote called Fairytale. A contest winner if I'm not mistaken.

While good, I feel that I must say, the version you submitted to me was vastly superior.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

I changed it due to comments that it lacked fluidity and appeal. I wish i hadn't! I think i have a c.. read more
This is short, but I like it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

Thank you! And thanks for stopping by! x
Whenever it comes to "fairy-tales"... the word "love" always seems belonging to such pieces, no matter what. Very nice & deep poetry! ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Melliflower

9 Years Ago

I couldn't agree more! And thank you x
Arsh

9 Years Ago

Sounds good by me.
Ps. Even the love belongs to you. xoxo

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Added on August 26, 2014
Last Updated on April 8, 2015
Tags: Love, Hate, Heart, Heartbeat, Heartbreak, Intoxicated, youth, teenage

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Melliflower
Melliflower

Australia



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