Why?

Why?

A Poem by Eliza Pleasant
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This poem shows what I sometimes feel. Nothing special. :) Enjoy!

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Why is it always me?

Why do I always have to the responsible one?

Why do I have to be he mature one?

Why do I have to forgive so easily?

Why do I have to be so vulnerable?

Why can't I be different?

 

© 2009 Eliza Pleasant


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This is so short and simple but it says a lot. I think a lot of us feel this way especially if u have a younger sibling. I know that I feel like this a lot. It sucks to have people depending on u all the time to be a certain way to be strong and to have to hide the fact that your breaking on the inside. The great thing about pretending to be strong is that u actually gain strength in doing so and u will make it through those feelings. Great job u portrayed your feelings very well.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, at one moment, I thought I was reading my own words. I feel the same way too... except for the very last part, I do feel different though, that's why I always carry the question "Why?"

Nicely written.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Shot and simple but very meaningful. I sure know how you feel... all the responsibility and all... its not easy... i wish the question why... could be answered.

Very nice poem, i enjoyed it


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very short piece of poetry, but simple and sweet too I might add! You really have shown more emotion than you think in this write and it's great to see such expressive work!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so short and simple but it says a lot. I think a lot of us feel this way especially if u have a younger sibling. I know that I feel like this a lot. It sucks to have people depending on u all the time to be a certain way to be strong and to have to hide the fact that your breaking on the inside. The great thing about pretending to be strong is that u actually gain strength in doing so and u will make it through those feelings. Great job u portrayed your feelings very well.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Eliza Pleasant

Lubbock, TX



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