Time?

a single spark
in the depths of night
and I knew
there will be no ending
like there was
a beginning



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Reviews

[StarBursts]

That is a vary pretty poem. :) :) :) :) :)

[Coyote Song]

Thanks very much!!

[StarBursts]

your welcome! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

A poem that makes me think.....beginnings are fresh and new. We all hope there will be no ending...and yet all too often they are inevitable. So much said in so few words. Lydi**

[Coyote Song]

Thanks very much!

[Black Cat Fever]

A nicely done poem full of questions.
Clever and creative

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so much!

[Eric Cox]

Cool, makes me think of God beginning time but never ending it. I like the positive feel to this poem very much. Nicely done.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so much Eric!

[Leslie Philibert]

I like Coyote`s short poems, they have a tanka like feeling of thought and poetic care. Excellent.

[Coyote Song]

Thank you so much!

[Tina Kline]

I like. Cleverly done. It makes me think of the beginning of time for which there will be no ending of time. A very good poem!

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so much!

[Tina Kline]

You're welcome!