Yellow Leaf

A yellow  leaf
Trapped in a barren hedge
Flutters helplessly
Like a trapped butterfly
In a spiders web

Reviews

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

The time is near and there are a few leaves who have succumb to an early demise who flutter and dance before my eyes..Great work reminding me of the beauty of the season soon to come..Thanks for the visit to my page..I am delighted that you read my work..Sara

[Coyote Song]

thank you very much.

[Leslie Philibert]

An old friend produces here another fine poem ; a tanka like, quiet poem, full of beauty

[Coyote Song]

Thanks so much.

[Tina Kline]

Beautiful and haunting at the same time.
I like it, very creative and imaginative.

[Coyote Song]

Thank you!

[Tina Kline]

You're welcome.

[Miss Owl]

The beauty of fall transfixed upon the cold harsh reality of winter. Nicely done. Very visual and enjoyably poem.

[Coyote Song]

Thank you!!

[Miss Owl]

You are welcome!

[Black Cat Fever]

i like this.
A beautiful yet rather chilling image.
I can easily visualize this.

[Coyote Song]

Thanks!!!!!

[Black Cat Fever]

You're welcome.