Questions In My Life

I feel...

nothing

nothing at all

I am numb,

and painless

yet scarred to hell

Do you ever think

about what it would be like

to experience death

about how it would be like

to know what life is

How sure can you be

that you know

who they are

to know when

what will happen

You say you know them

but how do you know

that they go behind your back

and say things opposite to what they say

to your face

that they fully support you

in your face and behind your back

Sometimes they say they love you

Yet, not always do they show it

So how can you be sure about anything

If nothing is really real

Like how can you be sure

If anything is real at all

Questions

Surround me

Everywhere

Everything is unsure

I never can understand anymore

But I can remember

When everything was definite

Reviews

[Willowtree]

Wow, for an 11 year old this is deep, shows maturity! I'm impressed you actually think about all these things! (this is a compliment, hope it didn't come out the wrong way!:)) I love the way you wrote the poem very spread out and spacey. It contributed to your poem and how you are talking about indefinite things and indecisiveness. It was very thought-provoking!
Thankyou so much for being the first to submit to the contest!:D

[Sunny]

Wow. I like how the poem has most of the questions that I can actually relate to. Nicew work!! :)