Mourning Palace

Mourning Palace

A Poem by Crazy Cat Man
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A poem for Destinyxi's contest :P

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Daylight has finally reached it's end
As evenfall strikes into the sky
Far away in the dark glimpsing moonlight
Sickening souls cry out in pain
Whispering voices summoning screams

Nothing is what it seems
You have lost your dreams
It will never come true
You might as well work in Wallgreens
You're life was a waste of time

What was the point of college?
With all that knowledge
Your life has fallen off the ledge
You're more deader
Than Heath Ledger

Misery Loves company
Stay the hell away from me
If you come close
I'll bury you without remorse
The door is forever closed

As you lay in your own coffin
I will vomit on your remains
As you eternally rest in shame
No one is to blame
Except your own rotten name

No more will I see your face
It has forever been replaced
Your life has been erased
All is left is disgrace
Good riddence is what I say

You will mourn forever
The loss of your life
You no longer put up a fight
Now it's time to end your plight
Close your eyes and wait to die

Artist: Dimmu Borgir
Song: Mourning Palace

© 2012 Crazy Cat Man


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Hell yeah!

Posted 7 Years Ago


nice. stupor here. you know it hurts. someone really hurt you, but you calm and cry if must, but you'll be ok. sometimes things happen, but don't fret. feeling your hurt. ---mishel

Posted 7 Years Ago


Wow, nice one. Your writing is actually amazing

Posted 7 Years Ago


..is this a song?
coz I clearly hear the melody as I read it
=]

Posted 7 Years Ago


.... "more deader than heath ledger" too soon? bwhahaha can't help it, it made me laugh

Posted 7 Years Ago


Why don't you tell us how you really feel? Lol you definitely conveyed your disgust succinctly! I like the walgreen's bit....

Posted 7 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

7 Years Ago

actually LOL this poem comes from nothing....i followd the rules of a contest and i picked a dark so.. read more
gah, i love dimmu and you *_*

-clears throat-

I'm actually beyond words at this point to give you a proper review...and for that i apolo---

*Is distracted by the music video*

Posted 7 Years Ago


Crazy Cat Man

7 Years Ago

Yes. Im also distracted by the video LOL. that was their live performance with a orchestra. I cannot.. read more
Whoever this is about they sure as s**t disapointed you. I get that from the 2nd stanza. I've a personal fear I'm never going to be as great as I was when I was in the Corps so I can relate to the piece. Great job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nothing is what it seams >>> seems unless you're actually talking about seams lol

This is freaking gooood hahaha. It's harsh but it's good. I love the cruelty of it, it's drenched in pure and utter anger. Good job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Destinyxi

7 Years Ago

Sexy song please haha. There aren't too many of those.
Crazy Cat Man

7 Years Ago

ok. I'll pick another sexy song for u ;)
Destinyxi

7 Years Ago

Haha looking forward to it then
Yep! I think brutal would describe this! :) Very nice... loved it from beginning to end.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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