New York City

I love NY. So I hope no one thinks I hate NY. I am writing from the point of view of someone who just wants the fast dream and doesn't want to work or be patient.

Welcome to the city of New York
where lots of friends come and go
Many Places promise lots of dough
But when you are broke
you dont have friends no more
Loose women everywhere
you don't have money to spare
So you are left in despair
No one even cares
You retreat to your lair
You have lost your flair
Life isn't fair
New York isn't what you thought
You thought you would be a star
But you are very far
You should've stayed where you are
So now what are you going to do?
You going to cry boo boo?
You didn't get the job you want?
So you're living back with your aunt?
New York the city of dreams
Nothing is what it seems
What do you want to be?
You are lost in reality.
At least you can say GO YANKEES!!!!!

Reviews

[Theresa]

I grew up and still live on Long Island an hour outside of New York City and while reading this I actually was sad on your outlook of the city. I love NYC I could go everyday and walk around and take in the sights, the museums and the people always something worth a double take. However I do know of the heartache that the city can cause. It's the city of hopes and dreams and it has a habit of eating people up and spitting them out. You just need to stay strong and hopefully in the end it will pay off. And yes when all else fails you can always rely on the Yankees!!!!! Thanks for sharing. I did enjoy it very much.

[deeps]

I"ve never been to New York but I like your write
Th ebottom line was kinda cute though,
Very well written and an enjoyable read!