Update

Update

A Poem by Crazy Cat Man

Yes it has been many years
Since I yanked your heart out
but I would like to know
what are you doing now?
No we will not get back together
I just wanted to ask about the weather
I'm dating someone new
I thought you already knew
Well I just wanted an update
to what  you're doing as of late
I think about you sometimes
when I'm with my lover
he reminds me of you
he's very cute
I just wanted to check
while I lay my head on his chest
I hope you are well
Until next time when I'm bored
I'll check up on you
To see if you miss me more
Aren't you happy for me
I found the love of my life
He asked me to be his wife
I hope you understand
I just wanted to stay friends
Perhaps I'll see you again
....For now this is just an update



© 2010 Crazy Cat Man


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wow... nice, this is one of the most subtle poems you've written, i loved it because in so many ways it encapsulates the heart at the moment. and at the same time brings to mind the past, present and future of life, love and longing, its as if being in love with someone new but void in the heart from that some

one who took a piece and left a hole, and its hard to determine just what it
is that will fill the void if but a memory revealed with a glimpse of pain that sneaks in every now and then and brings to life an update. awsome job, keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ouch...:P

Posted 13 Years Ago


wow... nice, this is one of the most subtle poems you've written, i loved it because in so many ways it encapsulates the heart at the moment. and at the same time brings to mind the past, present and future of life, love and longing, its as if being in love with someone new but void in the heart from that some

one who took a piece and left a hole, and its hard to determine just what it
is that will fill the void if but a memory revealed with a glimpse of pain that sneaks in every now and then and brings to life an update. awsome job, keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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