Giving Up Love

Giving Up Love

A Poem by Cool Girl
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A sad song about two people parting because they can't satisfy each other's needs..

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I'm in love with you..

Don't you hate knowing that you love him and he loves you too.

But you can't give each other what you need,

And your heart's about to bleed.

No more sound..

Silent room,

Torn up sheets upon the ground.

You wanted to play hide and seek..

You the finder,
Me the hider,

But I hid to well..
And protected myself.

I gave you the key
To my heart
To my soul,

But that isn't what you need

You needed comfort,
Needed pleasure,
Don't you see?

I wanted sweetness,
Wanted kindness,
Not sexual desire.

I wish to hug you
And place kisses on your head,

But that leads to other things, I'd rather skip instead.

You are my world,
You are my life,
Come hear my plea.

Darling I'm in love with you and you love me.

I don't want to ever have to let you go.

You're my sweetheart,
You're my angel,
Don't you know?

But I'm incapable of giving what you need.
I just wish it didn't have to be this way

Because I'm begging now,
I'm begging on my knees.

Why can't God just make this easier for me?

Because I'm in love!

And I'm crying
Yes, I'm crying

I need you..

Won't you say,
oh won't you say you need me too

I think I'm dying here inside,
And we all know why.

Because we're parting,
Now it's time to say goodbye..

© 2015 Cool Girl


Author's Note

Cool Girl
This isn't true..I just wrote it..

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Even though it is fictitious, you describe what many go through... love doesn't always fit between two people, for many different reasons... it's sad, but true... a great perceptive write, CG... smile on!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, FT! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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8 Years Ago

you write very well, CG... i like all your work!
Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

I'm flattered! :)
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I am glad it is not true. I hope you will always smile :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thanks, moonskittles! It's been a while since we've chatted. I hope all is well. Gorgeous profile pi.. read more
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8 Years Ago

thank you :D yours is lovely too!
Cool Girl

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much! :)

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Added on June 24, 2015
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