Contagious

Contagious

A Poem by Praveeta

Contagious

A pleasant sight it is
Eyes set on each other
Arms around each other
They twirl from one end to the other

Onlookers join in
Swaying with the rhythm
Mimicking the pioneers
In the quest for excellence

© 2013 Praveeta


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Onlookers join in
Swaying with the rhythm
Mimicking the pioneers
In the quest for excellence

you revealed an eternal truth :)
very good write :)
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Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and wonderful review. I appreciate it.
Anand Sehgal

10 Years Ago

my pleasure dear :)



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A touching piece that relates well to the wording, good read.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the lovely feedback.
I can feel the happiness of the dancers from far away.
Thank you for broadcasting the splendid scene in lovely words.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your beautiful comments Zainul. I am grateful that my words incited happiness in you.
zainul

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome,creative friend.
very romantic in nature, beautifully carved as the picture shows.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks Sayed for the positive feedback.
Reads as a seductive tango to me, the dance of life, lust and love. Nicely pen'd!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your lovely feedback.
Two people starting something like a dance or movement and it becomes contagious to have several following. Or it becomes a cause...An excellent write...:).............

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

This is based on a lovely couple that took the stage to celebrate Christmas and your explanation is .. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

MY pleasure...Any time...:)....................
The lovely dance that takes us away to parts unknown lol.I understand and i like :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome Praveeta. Happy new Year and happy holidays :>)
Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Happy New Year to you too!
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

.............................:>D

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Added on December 28, 2013
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Tags: Eyes, rhythm, twirl, contagious

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Praveeta
Praveeta

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