Summer Blessing

Rain pelts in summer
The dams cannot handle
Roots drink in solace

Author's Note

Heavy downpour since yesterday. Inspired by mother nature.

Reviews

[Kami Grace]

Rain has made us inconvenient to move around, while in the nature, rain is just like a blessing to all lives, which is shown very beautifully by the words 'roots drink in solace'. Brief yet all these simple words had reflected exactly what mother nature has given us. Very beautiful poem, Praveeta! :)

Kami

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the lovely review.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Very lovely indeed. ^-^ Keep up the great writing.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the inspiring review. I highly appreciate it.

[junaid altaf]

so you have managed to reveal the reveal the mystery!
and u used only a handfull of words!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading my piece.

[junaid altaf]

sorry for the double reveal.......... your welcome

[Praveeta]

It's ok. :)

[junaid altaf]

this o and k we really do hide our pains using it!

[Cid]

Your onself a rain, pravetta but yeah ...I loved this shorty-poetry. Actually, rain's been my fav. but I hate when it wets me like am standing under a shower. lol
Yeah, it's a beautiful write about nature. I enjoyed this poem!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for positive feedback.

[one sky]

Summer rain is indeed a blessing. After the exposure to sun's hot embrace, here are the drops to satisfy the thirsty souls.
Great!

[Praveeta]

Well explained!! Thanks for reading and for your positive feedback.

[prodicallife]

Dear Praveeta,

I can sense with your work, you think a lot.

It is not very easy to speak about something which even context to something else.

Fantastic write once again!!

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for amazing review.

[prodicallife]

You are welcome :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is excellent Praveeta.Rain who doesn't love it.

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for reading and appreciating my piece. Yes, rain in moderation is pleasant.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You ae welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

This one is wonderful and uses great metaphors. It tells me as tree roots in nature drink in solace after heavy downpours so too our souls drink the blessings of Heaven bestowed on us all...Excellent...:)............

[Praveeta]

I loved your interpretation. Thanks for your invaluable time and review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........................

[Ahena MK]

Really good ..... By the way you look Just like someone I Know very well.. :)
Keep crafting
100/100
Ahena :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for your lovely review. Does she also write poems :)

[Ahena MK]

no .. not even a single word of it!!!

[A. Amos]

Three lines but yet a whole story, like always you know how to portray a magical imagination from words. Thanks for sharing.

[Praveeta]

I feel elated that I created a poem that portrayed a magical imagination. Thanks for your time and review.

[A. Amos]

your are always welcome

[SAYED THANGAL]

it's a sun shine up on the tearful face

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and feedback.