Obeisances to God

Obeisances to God

A Poem by Praveeta

When things were falling apart
When things were beyond my control
And I was helpless
You intervened

You showed me the light
You gave me the courage
To withstand any obstacles
That came my way

Thank you God
For your guidance and support
For without your help
I would not be the person
I am today

© 2014 Praveeta


Author's Note

Praveeta
Just when I was thinking what to pen today, thoughts of our creator flooded my mind.

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It is lovely when we feel God loves us.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Yes, it sure is. Thanks a lot for reading my piece.
great work .!! people mostly ask god rarely they do thank him for what they are now :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the lovely feedback.
wonderfully said !!! really good ....
And I was helpless
You intervened
very very good !!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and lovely comment. I am glad you liked it.
Humble and sweet. I love poems that are down to earth like these :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the lovely comment. I am glad you loved it.
Simple & beautiful. A prayer in itself.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for the beautiful comment.
A nice, simple, and thankful prayer. We should always pray, not only when it's raining but when it's sunny, too.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

So true Michael. Thanks for your lovely words.
We have such little control over our lives, unlike the Divine. So, sometimes we must turn to them and have faith. Lovely prayer to your Lord Praveeta. May he guide and protect you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the lovely feedback.
Moon

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome :)
A sweet prayer Praveeta, nicely pen'd my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much lovely friend.
The poem is an ode to almighty..simple and truthful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and review.
With God all things are possible .The only constant in an ever changing world .A most inspirational poem my friend :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Praveeta

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much for the read and review dear friend.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)

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