MAGIC

Momentary visions
Ascending thoughts
Gripping the senses
Invoking the spirit
Chills me!

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

Magic not an attribute of the Savior but a craft of Satan so I am confused as to the idea of the poem. It's the title and line Ascending thoughts that has me wondering is this going towards God or away from him? Please excuse my candor as I know it is something of a rarity among this site.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and comment.

[Michael G. Smith]

Lol, I hoping for some insight on your write.

[Keerthisree]

Magical indeed. I love the way you've used your words to bring out something this vividly in just a few lines. :)

[Praveeta]

Thank you for the read and review. I appreciate it.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A fabulous, simple and unique piece, well done.

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for your lovely review. I appreciate it.

[Raymond Federle]

Inspirations in one's life certainly come from visual stimulus. Deep thinking is not always as helpful as it should be. Sometimes "simple" is best. Well done my friend. :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for your lovely words dear friend.

[Vaishali Roopesh]

Love the imagery you created in these few yet true lines! Thumbs up, Praveeta!

[Praveeta]

Thanks Vaishali. I am glad you liked it.

[SAYED THANGAL]

can be interpreted as a spiritual poem, momentary visions may lead to the of the God and would make certain changes on us, good one

[Praveeta]

Certainly dear friend. Thanks for your time and feedback.

[A. Amos]

P, these verses seem like magical spell and they work on me

[Praveeta]

I am glad they did. Thanks for reading.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome and always a pleasure

[Erik Daniel]

Simple but very well written. Nicely done!

[Praveeta]

Thank you for the read and review.

[Frieda P]

I get a voodoo vibe from this, shivers went up my mind. Few words invoking an emotive response, nicely pen'd Praveeta.

[Praveeta]

I felt the same as I was writing :) Thanks for the read and appreciating my piece.

[Frieda P]

Great minds and all that jazz ;-) My pleasure.