School of Lies

School of Lies

A Poem by Caleb
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I wrote this because I was tired of my classmates belittling a person who was in a rough situation. Also sorry for not writing in a while I have had a lot of things going on in my life.

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Words that make me cry

Comes from the school of lies.

The creatures that snarl
With words like daggers

Cut deep even in the scabbard


Do they not see how death

Rides on their words with every breath

I don’t want to cry

But it’s hard not to in the school of lies.


With my last breath I curse

Every beast with my words

If you utter a word of hate

Then you have no more breaths to take.

© 2015 Caleb


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I liked this was well written and has great meaning, sounded very poetic.
Keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really good! You can sense the strength and emotion in your words, and you put the poem together quite well. Good on ya!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! Very strong poem, with a clear message. You are certainly right that more people need to realize the damage that their words can cause. Thanks for the great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Caleb
Caleb

Roberts, MT



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I am new to this so please don't judge me to much. I am 17 and have been writing for only a few months. I hope to get better so please give me any pointers if you can. more..

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