A Dog's Fate

About dog abuse

That woman had a heart of stones.

She gave her puppy sweets and bones.

Too many carrots, also raw potatoes,

Cucumbers, peanuts and tomatoes.

Years passing, grew a diabetic dog,

Those sad big eyes melted in fog.

Six puppies she delivered hardly,

Her master flogging her so harshly.

She was good-natured after all,

Playing alone with her small ball.

And only once when she was cuddled

She bit that hand feeling befuddled.

She urinated on the floor,

That woman striking her once more.

A final stroke, her final plate.

Euthanasia was her fate.

Reviews

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Aaaaw, this poem is so emotional and sad.
You gave a perfect example of how dogs are treated cruelly.
This poem is so outstanding, plus sad :'(
Rating 100/100

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Many thanks, I am also very sad when I see dogs treated with cruelty.

[Marie]

I almost couldn't bear to read this poem...how could anyone do that...?

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Thanks Marie :( I was sad to hear about this dog's story.
Maybe I will revise this poem to make it longer and more comprehensive.