Butterflies

a one sentence poem for a contest

The shy girl can hear butterflies clasping their wings over city square roses.

Reviews

[Archia]

Oh that's so beautiful. I just had to have a gasp there. It's the three words at the end, they just make me gasp at wonder really. It describes so much; in emotions, in images, in it all.

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Thank you very much, I am happy you liked it.