House Flower

For a friend who needed a little extra encouragement

Distance is always

Changing,

Infinate in length

Harboring voids

Discovering truths

Leaving the past

Behind.

 

Never leading

To the present

Only the future.

Pushing further

Behind.

 

Distance is forever.

As is love.

To measure an inch

of a ruler

Is an inch not closer

To home.

 

Love can not

be measured.

It is ifinate

Whole

Always.

As is Distance.

 

Time creates

Distance

And void.

Tricks mind

Immobile.

 

Thoughtless.

Decisionless.

Helpless.

Rendered useless.

 

Love is sight.

Amplified beauty

A Vision.

Clarity.

Musically sound.

An art.

Mosaic of all.

 

With love

Distance Dissipates

Dissolves

Disappears.

To restore

Hope.

Faith.

Trust.

To be

Devine.

 

Love hurts

No One.

Only reveals

Those who

Hurt.

 

Savor love

Live life

Be humbled

Give power

To God

Trust inward

To move forward.

Rest in

The moment.

 

Time is distance.

Don't waste.

Love wholy.

Willingly.

Recieve love

To nurture

The deserving

House Flower.

Reviews

[Tom]

Inspirational indeed, the comparison between love and distance is quite fascinating and your presentation is sublime.

Super concept, top work !

[zainul]

What a wonderful relationship between love and distance!
Enjoyed the wonderful work.
Impressed by the stanza:


"Love is sight.
Amplified beauty
A Vision.
Clarity.
Musically sound.
An art.
Mosaic of all."

[G.A. Collins]

There are some exceptionally intricate concepts you have taken here, and weaved them within themselves so skilfully. The whole way through, I was simply gaping at the truth to this poem, and you highlighted things I had never truly thought of until now. The piece was dramatic, heavy and deep, and I enjoyed it from the start to the very end.

[ImagineItAll]

This is wonderful! My favorite part was: "Time creates
Distance
And void.
Tricks mind
Immobile." It is so true and it's so painful to even think about, let alone when it actually happens.

[Coyote Poetry]

Great wisdom in your poem.
"Savor love
Live life
Be humbled
Give power
To God
Trust inward
To move forward.
Rest in
The moment."
You are correct. Distance can be less if two people decide together is better and stronger. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote