multiple pain turns to blessings

uplifting write that will make the weak strong

In a world of multiple pain you find peace beneath

every stolen smile drops down a tear of comfort

love drives through a narrow way just to amend the heart

but the struggle makes it hard even when there is relief

even when nobody gives a helping hand you never gave up

born into a planet of cruel doings, a place where people don't care

but nevertheless there is always gonna be a way out even in distress

don't ever give up because it will drain your ability of doing great

instead give down to the world and the repay will be mighty.

Author's Note

This should smooth every corner that is rumpled

Reviews

[Jade]

even when nobody gives a helping hand you never gave up
born into a planet of cruel doings, a place where people don't care

These lines are ever so true, Sad but true, it seems no one cares anymore, it's hard to find someone that does. Very well written write here.

[Crosby Idasa]

thank you my friend, giving up is for the dead so anybody who is alive should keep trying