Let Heaven Come

Let Heaven Come

A Poem by Crosby Idasa
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This poem is a little piece to let you know we are in a painful world.

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That Apple 🍎 that Eve gave to Adam, Give me and I will eat it again. Maybe that will revoke the World back to its original state!

Maybe that might restore peace, maybe it will bring back Eden to Earth

All we see now is war, disaster, sickness

We are humans with same blood but we hate and kill each other because of skin color

Where is peace, Where is joy, Where is happiness

Let Heaven come Let every Body rest

© 2021 Crosby Idasa


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Crosby  Idasa
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You overstate the state of today's ugliness for dramatic effect. People like you are a part of the problem. Demanding "heaven", demanding paradise, because they haven't really seen reality. What you seek is an ideal because that notion "sells", you play the race card because it sounds good. You clearly have not witnessed true ugliness nor have you seen the beauty that eventually supplants it. You have no faith in humanity because you only see your own situation and are blind to anything not in line with it. I have no respect for this poem nor it's author. Sorry, just being honest.

Posted 3 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DDav

3 Months Ago

I don't want you to take that review too personal. I'm just trolling to instigate thought.. Though.. read more
Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

No Man, I’m not taking it personally. Sorry about that
DDav

3 Months Ago

Oh no need to apologize. If anyone should be apologizing it should be me.



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I will take a few of those apples, thank you.
We need more love to go around...and those who are nasty and hate will have it come around to them...and then they may have regrets.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


ignore the review of that person who is called (Dave) I blocked him long time ago because he has no respect not even for a Lady, if he thinks he is smart, intelligent and all aware and knowing of everything let him be, if he thinks being honest means to be disrespectful let him be, if can't see the good in your words it's then his brain issues, I surely don't have faith in humans like him, but I do have faith in humans like You, the battle between good and evil has been there since the existence and for a reason, if all people fail to believe and have faith and surrender to the temptations of the devil then goodness loses and this can't be. if You are being ideal it's because You are wishing the best for this earth, if You are demanding heavens to come, it's not because You want people to die... but because You are praying for its power to come side by side to help the good people saving humanity, spiritual wars do exist as the war in this world. Thank You for sharing your humanistic thoughts with us, and I think even if we back to Adam and Eve time to change anything, things will be the same as today.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Thank you for such a supportive review, nicely written and understood.

ICE
I found your words deeply moving. Yes, wouldn’t it be nice if we could just start over again. In a perfect world the Golden Rule would apply but in the meantime we mustn’t give up trying!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Thanks Dara, we must not give up in the meantime
I too, wonder what it would have been like if Adam hadn't eaten that apple. but guess what? We were know when we get to heaven.
Nicely done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

We’re in the end time, everybody gets a Judgment so not everyone will be in heaven! Thanks for yo.. read more
Not a day goes by without me thinking about Adam and Eve and what it must have been like for them and why they did what they did to lose it all. Wonderful poem. The world is so different now. Tyfs

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Thank you Van, but all that happened to Adam and Eve wasn’t their fault. Their was jealousy in hea.. read more
You overstate the state of today's ugliness for dramatic effect. People like you are a part of the problem. Demanding "heaven", demanding paradise, because they haven't really seen reality. What you seek is an ideal because that notion "sells", you play the race card because it sounds good. You clearly have not witnessed true ugliness nor have you seen the beauty that eventually supplants it. You have no faith in humanity because you only see your own situation and are blind to anything not in line with it. I have no respect for this poem nor it's author. Sorry, just being honest.

Posted 3 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DDav

3 Months Ago

I don't want you to take that review too personal. I'm just trolling to instigate thought.. Though.. read more
Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

No Man, I’m not taking it personally. Sorry about that
DDav

3 Months Ago

Oh no need to apologize. If anyone should be apologizing it should be me.
I agree my friend. I am 1/2 Ojibwa and my brother tribe in Canada. They found 215 Indigenous children in a mass grave. Near the school where they were forced into. Now Canada showed it real face. This story brake my heart. Just children.
"Where is peace, Where is joy, Where is happiness
Let Heaven come Let every Body rest"
It is time my friend. The four corners of world stand against hate, racism and separation. Powerful and needed words shared my friend.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Thank you so very much Coyote, your reviews teach me
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

When men do? I will never understand. I know you seen deeds of bad people my friend. When will it st.. read more
Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Yes, I have seen evil of people....even friends and family do evil to love ones
I certainly share sentiment regarding the state of our world and the intolerance towards our fellow citizens. We need to be mindful of other people. Because their views and beliefs are different from our own that doesn't make the other person wrong, we need to be respectful to live in peace. As for Eve and the apple, I hope all the evil isn't considered a direct result of her actions. Pinning all the evil in this world down to Eve is a bit of a cop out:) An interesting write Crosby and I am right with you when it comes to bringing a bit more heaven down to earth. All the best.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Crosby  Idasa

3 Months Ago

Thank you Chris, I appreciate your reviews. Nice

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