Why would you?

Why would you?

A Poem by Crow21

Why would you........ Carve yourself into my heart
Only to cut me short?

Why would you......... Show me the you that no longer hides
Only to reveal all your lies?

Why would you......... With those lips say I'm sorry
Only to release the burden you carry?

Why would you......... Let our beings become one
Only to say together we are wrong?

© 2013 Crow21


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Your 'Why would you.... Only' structure is strong. Your idea - contrast is excellent. Your ideas come through.

I would say that your exact language needs some work.

I enjoyed it!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Crow21
Crow21

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A Poem by Crow21