If I .....

If I .....

A Poem by Crow21

If I had a heart
My love for you would have never come apart

If I had a soul
My love for you would have never grown cold

If I had a voice
My love for you would have never ceased to rejoice

© 2013 Crow21


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Crow21, your 'if' structures are excellent. Your rhymes add to the effect because they are not forced, except maybe 'voice' and 'rejoice'. Nice!



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Crow21
Crow21

Manhattan, NY



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A Poem by Crow21