Love Condensates

I am in love

 

We’re sitting apart

I’m staring at the steamy

Cup of coffee with the

Tears running down my face

My love life is evaporating

Evaporating like the stream from the cup

My heart sores

 Like the crack in the cup

Someone tell me

Why does it hurt so badly?

Palpitations gently beating

Against my breast bone

As time passes by

Forever I will be haunted by his words

Forever I will be haunted by his touch

My mind reminisce to the days of love play

Waking up with his arms on my soft waist

Caressing my back where he left scratches

Love condensates

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

It is neat how you took simple things like a cup of coffee and painted a picture of loss and longing. Ah the memories and how they haunt us. Great work.

[Damien Dsoul]

There's a lovely scene of contrast with the narrator's broken heartache sipping away from her like the steam of smoke from her tea cup. The good thing is the poem, though it's ssad, but it's so gentle in tone and flow.

[Marina]

woah.

Great job.
Keep writing.:]