I still love you

This is just a song I did for fun. Hope you like it and pls ignore grammar problems.

My heart is broken (don't you know)

I can darken it no more

I've seen the world

Whirled around it for so long.

My head keeps burning

And keeps on adding

I still love you...

My soul fell down 

Across the town

I can't take this no more (cause)

I could not ignore

But I still love you...

It's like a message you want to send

across the stars to a different world

I can stay no more (but I have to say)

That I still love you.

Author's Note

Tnx for reading, hope you liked it

Reviews

[Cerise]

aww..very nice.....

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Thanks alot! :D

[SHEEMA HUQ]

ah, we can rarely control what we feel....your full commitment, i would think, would be hard to conceal, touching....

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Thanks! Glad u enjoyed it! :D

[Mia]

This is so lovely! I can't definitely relate to this. "I still love you" such haunting words. Wonderful job :)

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Thank u so much Mia! :)

[Mia]

It's a pleasure :)

[Miss. Smith]

This is good writing, it could be a song...

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It is. Though I'm still trying to find a melody. Tnx for reviewing! :)

[Summer'sBreeze]

So can relate.
Another great write. :))

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Glad u liked it! :)

[Lehlohonolo Lichaba]

wow i can relate

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Tnx

[kublakhan27]

I really like this one...great job :)

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glad u liked it :)

[kublakhan27]

:)

[Hotaru]

wow... i can feel your pain... because right now, I am feeling the hurt... like there is a hole in my chest...

"My heart is broken (don't you know)
I can darken it no more
I've seen the world
Whirled around it for so long.
My head keeps burning
And keeps on adding

I still love you..."

-i love it! :D

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tnx I wrote this to express my feelings and at that moment it was pain.

[Hotaru]

like you... i also write when the hurt and wounds are still fresh... :'(

[Rilaya-Endgayme]

Wow! That's really good! So deep and emotional! I started writing lyrics when I was twelve. I wrote a few that didn't make any sense just as practice, but then about a month after dabbling, I wrote my first hit called Disconnected (which you can check out on my profile). I'm sixteen now and have written a total of twenty-four songs, and though I don't write songs as often as I did when I was younger, I still scribble down whatever comes to me every now and then. ;) Anyway, keep up the great work! You're gonna have an amazing career someday!

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tnx

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

wonderful!

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tnx