Alone

I feel alone

As if I where

On a lonely darkend street

The wind it brushes against me

While the tall buildings they laugh at me

I feel alone and faint

Please do come and help

I feel like a dog without their master

Like a book without letters

Like an oyster without its pearl

Please go rescue me

I have scars which can not be seen

For they are deep inside me

My heart was broken to many times

And my soul felt lonely for too much time

Author's Note

Hope u like it! It expresses my inner feelings. When I started going to school.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

awh, sad, hearty sentiments expressed very well, I hope that your school experience improved dramatically in every way since then.

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Yes it did! Tnx for asking though and for reviewing! :D

[Bluefire]

great job, I love that it was written from the heart. :)

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I'm flattered! :) Tnx! I'm glad u liked it! :D

[Bluefire]

No problem :3

[Anonymous Girl]

I feel alone :(
My feelings were same when I started to go to school..
Its amazing
Keep writing :)
100/100

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Every one feels like this I think but we all pass it and then have a great time! :D Tnx for reviewing!

[Anonymous Girl]

You are welcome

[Pax]

really emotional. Great work

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I'm glad u liked it! :)

[Steven Cash]

*as if I were

not 'where'

great job!

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Tnx for telling me! :D

[kublakhan27]

Some really powerful imagery...nice work^^

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Thanks! :)

[kublakhan27]

No problem :)

[Miiki]

I love it!! I understand cuz i feel the same way about school! None of the people that were in the same classes with me last year are in my classes now, so I can be lonely. :)

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Gonna happen to me aswell I'm starting high school here in Andorra. New teachers and new kids. I'm glad u liked it though! :D

[rnuff]

Such an amazing read, so full of emotions.

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Thanks I'm glad u liked it! :)

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Top piece of work this. Keep it up "K" your an inspiration.100!

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Thank u! Really flattered! :)