Oh my love!

Could really do with some feedback, i honestly don't quite know if this makes sense or if it's even worth publishing..

Oh dear! My love! My one and only,

Again, oh my its happened again, 

My lungs have lost the air they breath,

All because of that look of perfection.

You've stolen my last gasp and left me helpless only to beg;

Oh my darling please spare me tonight,

For it was my heart that was so fragile,

That look of yours so dark, so beautiful i dare say, as i know that only scrapes the surface of what you truly portray.

So my Queen, I ask for one wish,

May you return my stolen breath so i may live once again, only to be left powerless once more,

By your ever so elegant gaze.