Buttermre in January

Buttermre in January

A Poem by Wild Rose


January afternoon walking round Buttermere lake

Shouldn't need to say lake

Mere means Water

Like saying Butterwater Lake

Enough of that

 

Buttermere was not in the 'Doomsday Book'

Intended to count and record every hamlet and town

 

There is only one entrance to the valley at low level

Two roads over the mountains and two walkers tracks

The approach from the north over the hills was

At the time they were collating the information

Through bogey land using paths known only to the locals

The soldiers became bogged down and had to make camp

Over night they were all killed in their beds, by unknown locals

 

Some time later another patrol was despatched

They were spotted from the summit of Robinson

A picket was set at the entrance to the valley

Through a narrow wooded defile

Up the Rannerdale Valley

Ditches were dug across the new way

Covered with rushes. The bottom had spikes

 

When the men in tin suits on horseback walked over them and fell in

The were spiked; Those who were not: were l

Killed by the Brits

Youths were given a potion made from 'Magic Mushrooms"

To make them fearless
Striped off their serks

The beserkers went with knives held over their heads

Running under the remaining horses to cut their bellies

The men in tin suits were helpless on the ground

 

No one ever got to count Buttermere for the great 'Doomsday Book'

 


© 2018 Wild Rose


Author's Note

Wild Rose
Serks An old name for shirt /smock
Beserkers given the magic mushrooms - fearless (No shirt) fighters

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A very interesting account.
You must be a history buff which is something I have always enjoyed, more inclined to the aspect of conflict rather than to the ways of those seeking peace
why do men continue to fight
even today the stupidity goes on but it does make good (?) reading provided you are far enough away in either time or distance

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

Ah I was a Voluntary Warden for thr Lake District National Park Authority for a while > This was the.. read more


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Your poem is so informative Wild Rose, quite a read. That potion of magic mushrooms did the trick then. What imagery you have given me with that onslaught. Your posted image a treat to look at. Thank you and have a nice week-end.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

Thank you: I am looking for nice images to use
Buttermere is often referred to as "The Secre.. read more
Chris Shaw

5 Years Ago

Your photographs are stunning.
Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

Thanks > I do edit them for the best result
Had one rejected from the only comp I entered the.. read more
What an absolutely compelling account of previously unknown events.. to me anyway.. am sure some clever beggar already knew tho... an education and a half.... spot on my friend...Neville

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

That is what comes of taking on voluntary (or full time) jobs showing people round Places like "The .. read more
Neville

5 Years Ago

My pleasure...
I enjoyed this read even thou sad and poignant. Travelling into your mind's eye and following the route. These people took in the past. Following history and times are gone with said lost souls.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

Sad those boys lost/gave their lives
The King had decreed that every place should be listed .. read more
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

That is sad and tragic to hear. It should have been included in the Doomsday book. But history delet.. read more
A very interesting account.
You must be a history buff which is something I have always enjoyed, more inclined to the aspect of conflict rather than to the ways of those seeking peace
why do men continue to fight
even today the stupidity goes on but it does make good (?) reading provided you are far enough away in either time or distance

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wild Rose

5 Years Ago

Ah I was a Voluntary Warden for thr Lake District National Park Authority for a while > This was the.. read more

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Added on July 22, 2018
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Tags: Buttermere, story, Cumbria, romantic, short story, Landscape, Historic

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Wild Rose
Wild Rose

Lake Disrtict, Cumbria, United Kingdom



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