boundless

he who dare challenge my boundlessness,
shall crumble in my palms,
shall be whipped by my tongue,
and teased until his morality slips.
shall be stripped of the air in his lungs.

Reviews

[JC]

Personal freedom is most important to us artists/writers, it allows us to experience and learn and create, never let anyone take that away from you.

[ZakLeonRamsey]

Good descriptions, it is short but it doesn't really matter, and what matters most, is the poem you are actually writing and how you write it, always remember. Good job. I like it how the use of metaphors puts a positive effect on it, making it seem better than just, text, you give me an image, some funny, some disturbing, which is good. 100/100. Have a nice day :)