Imagine:

Imagine:

A Poem by Fuzzy_Poluzah
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this....imagine it...I COMMAND YOU! :D

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I`m sitting in class, as bored as can be,
I sit and think, my thoughts fly free,
The chalk turns into a paper airplane,
I try my best not to squirm or strain,
The teacher stares, with laser eyes, around the room,
I pass notes to my friends, and hope they write back soon,
Butterflies fill the useless, blank, class,
Birds fly by the window of pure, shiny, glass,
Posters and maps come to life, off the wall,
They try to walk, but down they fall,
The letters on the board, turn into a lion,
He roars out colours, from dull to neon,
The roof flies away into the sky,
I laugh so hard, my tongue had dried,
The desks melt into dogs and eat the other children,
The chairs are in war, the sky turns crimson,
My notebook tweets and scurries away,
But the pencil in my hand, had decided to stay.

© 2013 Fuzzy_Poluzah


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Fuzzy_Poluzah
Use the pencil to draw out your life, it`s all you! Share your thoughts:

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Whoa! I want what you had for lunch! LOL
I like this, it shows talent and wit with a vivid sense of humor. It needs a small touch of polish; read it aloud and you will find the minor flow glitches. Do not let criticism inhibit your writing. Your work is good enough to take the time to speak of minot things that will polish to perfection your work.
If you have questions, drop me an inbox, put the name of your poem on the subject line so I can locate it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I loved this! There was something so simple and so innocent about this piece that I really liked, and I thought that you captured the colour and creativity of this concept perfectly. The imagery that you created was incredible, and I definitely caught myself smiling as I read this poem. There were a few moments here and there where I felt that the rhythm was a little off, but other than that, this was a really enjoyable, captivating read. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

Posted 13 Years Ago


lol this sound's Like me trying to kill boredum lol! and imagination what a great thing to have what did you eat for lunch haha.

thank you for sharing Blessings lily

Posted 13 Years Ago


Whoa! I want what you had for lunch! LOL
I like this, it shows talent and wit with a vivid sense of humor. It needs a small touch of polish; read it aloud and you will find the minor flow glitches. Do not let criticism inhibit your writing. Your work is good enough to take the time to speak of minot things that will polish to perfection your work.
If you have questions, drop me an inbox, put the name of your poem on the subject line so I can locate it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 20, 2010
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Fuzzy_Poluzah
Fuzzy_Poluzah

Surrey, BC, Canada



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