Irrevocable Friendship

Irrevocable Friendship

A Poem by Melinda Weber
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A poem, about my new short story :) Does this make you want to read the story.... https://www.facebook.com/pages/Curious-Alice/246414818762343?sk=wall =)

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Is it friendship or an obsession?

I am stuck in a stage of an anxious reasoning,

Testing the murky waters,

 of rejection.

I’ve developed an addiction,

To the burn of my jealousy.

The sear of envy,

To solve this problem,

And show her that I’m serious.

I will make her learn,

I will make her remember.

But she won't hate me for it,

She possibly wouldn't dare

Because it doesn't matter in the end.

Friends who kill together,

Stay together....right?



© 2012 Melinda Weber


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Stunning piece!!! 100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great write. It's dark yet is truthful with friends. There can be jelousy and gossip with any friendship.

Adalynn

Posted 8 Years Ago


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that has a dark and sinister tone..sounds like a excellent opener for a short story.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh, i likey. sweet and sinister all in the one write, excellent.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem, although brief, says quite a lot. Possessiveness, jealousy, gossip.
Friendships, especially among us girls, can involve quite a lot of drama....

Great read.

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FTL

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting poem. I like how the pleasant language and cheery flow suddenly cut off by the unsuspected ending add a slight sense of insanity. Just curious, what is the name of the short story this is about? Thank you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The picture is priceless.
The poem is clever and well
done.
----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an interesting piece. First off, the structure and rhymes are nicely conveyed. Also I like the way you ended it a lot. Good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

very nicely done, love the picture as well.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Melinda Weber
Melinda Weber

Wonderland, Australia



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Hmmm, about me....Extreme day dreamer. Friend of unicorns, fluffly things and most humans :) Freelance adventurer and writing ninja :) My experiences with love, heavily influence my writing. Not j.. more..

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