A Daydream

A Daydream

A Poem by Melinda Weber

I am the one, who is dancing

Along to this melody you give me.

I take your hand, I smile softly,

As I secretly wish I could tell you,

I love you.


We will meet,

 Under your mysterious intentions,

Luring me with your complicated heart.

As we stand, a truth in the dark

I devour your enticing whispers,

Swirling fantasies through my mind.

If anyone had a chance to find this heart,

It was always going to be you.

The sweetness of this pain you have given me,

Will always be the drug that runs with my blood.

The secret is out, in the winds of tomorrow

It’s written in the bone of the heart.

A roulette game, a throw of the dice

For a love made entirely of fire and ice.



© 2012 Melinda Weber


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4/2/18
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"My Thought's about having a Look at Your Work, Melinda Weber"
by PB Jacobs (www.writerscafe.org)

Hey, Melinda Weber!

So you like to daydream, huh? Here's a bit of food for thought, and yes, this is a different kind of review thing, but I feel like doing something out of the ordinary.

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/AliceBarnes07/1938843/

You seem to be a neat person! Neato! You might want to follow this link, as well: http://www.writerscafe.org/LittleHub1/writing/

PB Jacobs

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Since you say your a day dreamer I thought I would read this one first.
Love can feel like a day dream sometimes, and daydreaming of a lover can feel like dream come true. If that makes sense? Love the poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like the words "Fire and ice." I like the feel and the desire in this poem. Strong description create good visions and a entertaining poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow Alice, how beautiful, I see here very painful aspects, and filled with daily truth of some, you have captivated within glance, and made truth dance~ well done xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The look and feel of a "Mad Hatter" finding his Alice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A pleasing song of love.... flowing with melody in the heart and a sense of pleasure of love's darts

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Melinda Weber
Melinda Weber

Wonderland, Australia



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Hmmm, about me....Extreme day dreamer. Friend of unicorns, fluffly things and most humans :) Freelance adventurer and writing ninja :) My experiences with love, heavily influence my writing. Not j.. more..

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